I recently finished the first draft of a potential DMs Guild book about the forest that will later be called Cormanthor during the First Flowering, specifically the 'primitive' green and dark elves who inhabit the great forest c. -17,000 DR. (I know that's speculative and not rooted in the lore - at least none that I've read.)
I could really use some fresh sets of eyes to take a look at the book and help me improve it however possible.
For instance: While working on the text of my next potential DMs Guild book, I realized the gap between Cormyr (the western edge of future-Cormanthor) and the elf kingdoms of the 'Sword Coast' was only a few hundred miles, which makes the presented deep isolation of the Cormanthor elves from their kin to the west a little odd.
That's the kind of thing I'd really appreciate feedback on. If you're interested, please let me know, and I'll send you a link to the text on Google Documents.
Beta-readers request
Posted - 26 Feb 2024 : 12:38:17
