| T O P I C R E V I E W |
| Alaundo |
Posted - 28 Nov 2005 : 22:55:32
Well met
This is a Book Club thread for Ghostwalker, book 2 of the Fighters series, by Erik Scott de Bie. Please discuss chapters 4-7 herein: |
| 30 L A T E S T R E P L I E S (Newest First) |
| Alisttair |
Posted - 25 Feb 2009 : 17:58:20
This is getting me excited. |
| Chosen of Moradin |
Posted - 25 Feb 2009 : 17:08:24
Exactly. The development of Walker, as a character, became greater and greater while we´re reading. |
| The Red Walker |
Posted - 25 Feb 2009 : 16:39:06
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Originally posted by Alisttair
Now that I have reached this point of the novel, my interest in Walker has increased even more. Ominous and mysterious. I like that.
It only gets better |
| Alisttair |
Posted - 25 Feb 2009 : 16:31:28
Now that I have reached this point of the novel, my interest in Walker has increased even more. Ominous and mysterious. I like that. |
| riot the outsider |
Posted - 07 Sep 2008 : 22:52:24
Acourse I will. I need all the details.And thank you Erik. |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 07 Sep 2008 : 21:20:10
I'm glad you're enjoying, and I hope you keep reading!
Now, don't read into this comment, but . . . make sure you read the rest of the novel before you start a piece to continue Walker's story. 
Cheers |
| riot the outsider |
Posted - 07 Sep 2008 : 20:00:09
Wow! great job Erik,you are in my top ten. Walker looks like and acts just like me.If I were going to get revenge.Hes omnius, the whole book so far is omnius and errie.I love this kind of writting kind of gothic but not to dark.Depths was like this too,but so far I've only read five chapters of that . Maybe I'll write a continue of walker's story if thats ok with you. Alot of people want an book with walker in it.Keep writting Erik and I'll keep reading.Even your spellplague novels as well. P.s. still waiting for whisper hope you get that set up soon. |
| Chosen of Moradin |
Posted - 13 Sep 2006 : 21:37:25
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Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie
Some day -- I promise.
Aha! You have sait it! Now remember, we dwarves have good memories. I will wait for it (and put Hammer and Mace alert, too).
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It first appeared in Sword and Fist, and was updated for 3.5 in the DMG. It's a specific weapon, not a particular property, but I wouldn't guess it would be too difficult to slap a ghost touch enchantment on one of those swords.
Ouch! In the DMG and I don´t have see it? What a shame...
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Shh! We don't talk about that Dragonlance thing here!
Oh cripes -- Alaundo's staff!   
Cheers
You have luck! It´s better confront the wrath of Alaundo´s staff that the terror that is the Swarm of Giant Space Hamsters of Ill Omen minis!!!  |
| Jorkens |
Posted - 13 Sep 2006 : 20:39:59
Take it easy Alaundo, I left that nice gnome with the blowtorch to look after them. It was right by those copies of Once Around the Realms |
| Alaundo |
Posted - 13 Sep 2006 : 20:32:56
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Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie
Shh! We don't talk about that Dragonlance thing here!
Oh cripes -- Alaundo's staff!
Cheers
Ahem...Kender? where? Why i'll batter the blighters if they think of stealing our tomes  |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 13 Sep 2006 : 19:50:27
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Originally posted by Chosen of Moradin
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Enjoyed? I want now to see a dwarven book penned by you, Erik!
Some day -- I promise.
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I have that strange feeling that always exist more than what I´m seeing (and I´m not talking about Talthaliel here). Talking with a deceptive tiefling don´t help this.
I take that as high praise.
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And by the way, english is easy, believe me! Brazilian portuguese is a real kick in the ***
I've always wanted to learn Portuguese. It seems like a cool tongue. Unfortunately, I don't have a knack for linguism -- that would be the other half of my household, who learns languages over the summers and such.
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Good. It´s stated in some supplement, or something created by you?
It first appeared in Sword and Fist, and was updated for 3.5 in the DMG. It's a specific weapon, not a particular property, but I wouldn't guess it would be too difficult to slap a ghost touch enchantment on one of those swords.
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Yup, I just find Unddreth in the Silver Marches. Well, as I have said, it will be interesting to see a dwarf created by you. The care and the good way that you treat all the races and "character classes" in Ghostwalker put me to think thay you would be one of the guys that will treat the stout folk properly.
Thanks! I like to think so as well. I guess we'll find out when I get around to writing a dwarf one of these days.
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The eternal teaser, eh? You received lessons of a certain kender of a certain trilogy of a certain other setting?
Shh! We don't talk about that Dragonlance thing here!
Oh cripes -- Alaundo's staff!
Cheers |
| Chosen of Moradin |
Posted - 13 Sep 2006 : 16:54:29
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Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie
Glad you think so! It was an important scene, and there was more going on between the characters than met the eye -- I tried to emphasize the tension between all involved.
Yes, the tension was so great that someone could cut the air with a knife without edge. Anyway, now that I just finished chapter 11 and delve a little more in Greyt action, I re-read this encounter. The bard continue to grow in my concept.
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Well, he *did* catch them off-guard. I wonder if there will be a rematch?
Funny. I wonder the same thing.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Enjoyed? I want now to see a dwarven book penned by you, Erik!
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I should mention that Gylther'yel isn't necessarily a ghost, per se -- she might be alive, she might be undead. Who knows?
Sounds a little like Walker himself.
Right. A druid ghostwalker... may Moradin protect my beard.
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Glad you're intrigued -- the dynamic amongst Lyetha, Greyt, and Meris will be important.
I have that strange feeling that always exist more than what I´m seeing (and I´m not talking about Talthaliel here). Talking with a deceptive tiefling don´t help this.
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Glad it worked out -- I think learning words by reading is an excellent strategy. And if I expand your English (which is an infernally tough language anyway) with my book, I'll be pleased as punch.
It´s a very good way to lear, indeed. 
And by the way, english is easy, believe me! Brazilian portuguese is a real kick in the ***
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It's a type of magical sword that is especially sharp and made for breaking other weapons.
Good. It´s stated in some supplement, or something created by you?
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Oh, I have a feeling Walker will encounter watchmen again.
I have that feeling, too.
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Unddreth is probably the closest thing I come to a dwarf in the novel. I'm sorry -- none of the shorter folk in this one.
I'm glad you like the character, though! He was fun using. I didn't make him up -- he's statted (briefly) in the Silver Marches accessory.
Yup, I just find Unddreth in the Silver Marches. Well, as I have said, it will be interesting to see a dwarf created by you. The care and the good way that you treat all the races and "character classes" in Ghostwalker put me to think thay you would be one of the guys that will treat the stout folk properly.
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I´m expecting to see Meris receive a good lesson.
And maybe you will. Or maybe not. Ah ha!
Cheers
The eternal teaser, eh? You received lessons of a certain kender of a certain trilogy of a certain other setting? |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 12 Sep 2006 : 20:17:56
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Originally posted by Chosen of Moradin
Chapter 4 - The meeting of Arya and Greyt was well done. Again, the details make the diference, here. The details in Greyt´s mansion, the perceptions of Arya, the disdain of Greyt with Bars and Derst. All this together make a good meeting.
Glad you think so! It was an important scene, and there was more going on between the characters than met the eye -- I tried to emphasize the tension between all involved.
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And I stay worried when Meris take care of Bars and Derst so easily ... Arya will be in trouble, if the guys don´t start to stay more focused...
Well, he *did* catch them off-guard. I wonder if there will be a rematch?
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Chapter 5 - the scene of Walker in the glade, and his vision of the ethereal, was simply state of art! Erik, really is dificult to say anything about your work, when you describe some place, person or situation - like these first moments of Walker in this chapter, are out of comments, or praise. Simply perfect!
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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And so, another player came to the game. The Ghostly Lady not only exist, but is the mentor of Walker. So, Gylther´yel is a ghost, a druid and a sun elf! Great combination of factors.
I should mention that Gylther'yel isn't necessarily a ghost, per se -- she might be alive, she might be undead. Who knows?
Sounds a little like Walker himself.
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Back to Quaervarr, Arya goes to the investigation. I will send Derst, but I know that sometimes, the women really think that they could do all alone. And we have the first contact with Lyetha. She intrigues me, and let me curious. I´m expecting to see Lyetha a little more. But that dastard Meris have to appear and "finish" the night for her.
Glad you're intrigued -- the dynamic amongst Lyetha, Greyt, and Meris will be important.
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The confront in the alley was very good. I think that the assailant was a certain despicable scout, but anyway, Walker came to save the night (it´s not Gotham city, but I feel some echoes in the scene...). A very cinematographic scene, indeed.
Heh heh -- my little homage to my childhood comic hero.
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Chapter 6 - Wooooooooh! Walker appearing from the nothing between Torlic and Narb was perfect! The battle of the two was a very good, but I have to read it with more care (too much new words that I have learned in that scene - read a battle scene consulting the dictionary break the moment, but nothing that a second read couldn´t make better).
Glad it worked out -- I think learning words by reading is an excellent strategy. And if I expand your English (which is an infernally tough language anyway) with my book, I'll be pleased as punch.
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By the way, what is a shatterspike blade?
It's a type of magical sword that is especially sharp and made for breaking other weapons.
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I think that any guard will stay very impressed after that night.
Oh, I have a feeling Walker will encounter watchmen again.
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Chapter 7 - Greyt aide, Tamnus, is a relative of CS Lewis´s Mr. Tumnus?
Hmm -- I hadn't seen that connection. Perhaps!
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Ahem. I like of Unddreth. It´s good to know that is something important in the city out of the control of Greyt and his band.
Unddreth is probably the closest thing I come to a dwarf in the novel. I'm sorry -- none of the shorter folk in this one.
I'm glad you like the character, though! He was fun using. I didn't make him up -- he's statted (briefly) in the Silver Marches accessory.
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I´m expecting to see Meris receive a good lesson.
And maybe you will. Or maybe not. Ah ha!
Cheers |
| Chosen of Moradin |
Posted - 12 Sep 2006 : 19:49:01
And the tale stay more and more interesting!
Chapter 4 - The meeting of Arya and Greyt was well done. Again, the details make the diference, here. The details in Greyt´s mansion, the perceptions of Arya, the disdain of Greyt with Bars and Derst. All this together make a good meeting. And Meris like of dramatic arrivals, eh? The "sweet wine and light jests" of Greyt, in the end, mark one more point to the dastard in my opinion.
And I stay worried when Meris take care of Bars and Derst so easily ... Arya will be in trouble, if the guys don´t start to stay more focused...
Chapter 5 - the scene of Walker in the glade, and his vision of the ethereal, was simply state of art! Erik, really is dificult to say anything about your work, when you describe some place, person or situation - like these first moments of Walker in this chapter, are out of comments, or praise. Simply perfect!
And so, another player came to the game. The Ghostly Lady not only exist, but is the mentor of Walker. So, Gylther´yel is a ghost, a druid and a sun elf! Great combination of factors.
Back to Quaervarr, Arya goes to the investigation. I will send Derst, but I know that sometimes, the women really think that they could do all alone. And we have the first contact with Lyetha. She intrigues me, and let me curious. I´m expecting to see Lyetha a little more. But that dastard Meris have to appear and "finish" the night for her.
The confront in the alley was very good. I think that the assailant was a certain despicable scout, but anyway, Walker came to save the night (it´s not Gotham city, but I feel some echoes in the scene...). A very cinematographic scene, indeed.
Chapter 6 - Wooooooooh! Walker appearing from the nothing between Torlic and Narb was perfect! The battle of the two was a very good, but I have to read it with more care (too much new words that I have learned in that scene - read a battle scene consulting the dictionary break the moment, but nothing that a second read couldn´t make better). By the way, what is a shatterspike blade?
Again, Walker use his abilities and a clever maneuver to bring down an enemie. The fact that he disappears in the shadows, after the confront with the guards, Meris and Arya was a good one: help to make grow more the misterious aura about him. I think that any guard will stay very impressed after that night.
Chapter 7 - Greyt aide, Tamnus, is a relative of CS Lewis´s Mr. Tumnus?
Ahem. I like of Unddreth. It´s good to know that is something important in the city out of the control of Greyt and his band. Finally, Lyetha appears again. Ouch! She´s gone too fast. The lady Greyt is more sneaky than Walker! And it´s very frustrating, when Arya told his mission to Greyt. Anyway, Greyt speak more than he could, when he mention the attack in the alley. Well, he is not perfect, and this little error have potential to great damage. I love it. And again, "the scout that make my happiness dissapear" came to scene again. I´m expecting to see Meris receive a good lesson.
And what? Greyt have a wizard mage in his sleeves, that not even Meris know nothing about?
Things are going more misterious, and perilous.
Let´s turn some more pages. |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 29 Aug 2006 : 03:01:29
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Originally posted by The Red Walker
That did not seem a very elvish thing to inscribe on a gift. It made me wonder if it was something Greyt may have given his Lady Wife as a warning? (She has most likely questioned Greyt about her sons murder many times over the years.) I read earlier in this scroll that the locket does not re-appear, but is the inscription forshadowing something?
I'm going to answer this with the wonderful (for me) and terrible (for you), PERHAPS.
MWAHAHAHA!
Ahem.
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Loved the duel with Torlic, I echo the other scribes high marks for it. What really capped it for me though was the tension with Arya when they lock blades. It picked up perfectly with the tone of his departure from her in the alley.
I'm glad you liked that! I very much enjoyed the choreography of that scene.
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(Please kill Meris by the by)
Sure, you say that now.
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It seems that something about her rattles him, as nothing has since his re-birth.
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I had no doubts that if any other living being had been the only thing between Walker and his escape, he would have slayed without compunction.
Well, probably not entirely without compunction. After all, he felt disappointed he had to kill that guard in Drex's house. But without hesitation, oh yeah.
Cheers |
| The Red Walker |
Posted - 28 Aug 2006 : 23:44:48
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Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie
Oh, you're absolutely right -- I'm just 1) explaining what goes on with the locket (and I don't think I mention it again in the books -- oops!) and 2) doing my part to keep the ambiguity going -- 'tis my job. ;)
That's a legitimate point you raise about the "stealing" bit. I think if Arya were to discover the locket in her pocket (rather than it getting lost later on), she would feel very bad about having taken it and seek to return it. But she gets caught up, as you have probably already seen.
I also got the feeling that was very "Unknightly" of Arya, but it did not seem to be a big deal, what piqued my curiousity were the inscription "It is easier to destroy than create" in Elvish script.
That did not seem a very elvish thing to inscribe on a gift. It made me wonder if it was something Greyt may have given his Lady Wife as a warning? (She has most likely questioned Greyt about her sons murder many times over the years.) I read earlier in this scroll that the locket does not re-appear, but is the inscription forshadowing something?
Loved the duel with Torlic, I echo the other scribes high marks for it. What really capped it for me though was the tension with Arya when they lock blades. It picked up perfectly with the tone of his departure from her in the alley.(Please kill Meris by the by)
It seems that something about her rattles him, as nothing has since his re-birth. I had no doubts that if any other living being had been the only thing between Walker and his escape, he would have slayed without compunction.
On to chapter 8!! |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 29 Dec 2005 : 16:43:35
Oh, you're absolutely right -- I'm just 1) explaining what goes on with the locket (and I don't think I mention it again in the books -- oops!) and 2) doing my part to keep the ambiguity going -- 'tis my job. ;)
That's a legitimate point you raise about the "stealing" bit. I think if Arya were to discover the locket in her pocket (rather than it getting lost later on), she would feel very bad about having taken it and seek to return it. But she gets caught up, as you have probably already seen. |
| Dhomal |
Posted - 29 Dec 2005 : 03:13:45
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Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie
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She didn't really steal it, per se -- she was just looking at it and by instinct put it in her pocket, then forgot about it. I don't honestly recall if it reappears later in the book -- I don't think so. Pretty sure I meant to have it show up again, but there are good reasons it's not there. If you're curious at the end, mention it again in the last thread, and we'll chat about it. :)
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Speaking of his wife - I find it interesting that from what I am getting out of the book - and the one statement - that she will be killed later in the book. Seems odd to mention that she will not talk to her again if she is not killed. But - seems to be the fates of all his previous wives....
Ah, the statement just says "they would never speak again." Doesn't necessarily mean death, but I agree that that seems the easiest explanation. Question, though: how do you know that doesn't mean ARYA will be killed?
Hello-
Well - OK - I 'suppose' that it could be instinct - but it just seems a bit wrong - when she - and the other two knights are sticklers for how people treat Arya and such - but if you say its not important...... :)
Also - no - I would have no basis for saying that it was the wife and not Arya - but 1) Greyt's wives seem to have a high fatality rate (hence the term wives - in the plural) and 2) Just from the way its written. :)
I am - actually - a chapter or two further along right now - and am waiting to open the next scroll when I finish those chapters.
Dhomal |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 28 Dec 2005 : 16:10:19
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Originally posted by Dhomal
I agree with previous comments - but one thing was not mentioned that I noticed - that I thought was quite glaring.
Arya basically stole that pendant from Greyt's desk. Seems Very out of character for her - or what I envision a knight doing. Certainly - there must be some plot reason for her to be in possession of it. Too bad it could not have gotten into her possession in a better way. LIke - given to her by Greyt's wife - who she meets briefly in his study.
She didn't really steal it, per se -- she was just looking at it and by instinct put it in her pocket, then forgot about it. I don't honestly recall if it reappears later in the book -- I don't think so. Pretty sure I meant to have it show up again, but there are good reasons it's not there. If you're curious at the end, mention it again in the last thread, and we'll chat about it. :)
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Speaking of his wife - I find it interesting that from what I am getting out of the book - and the one statement - that she will be killed later in the book. Seems odd to mention that she will not talk to her again if she is not killed. But - seems to be the fates of all his previous wives....
Ah, the statement just says "they would never speak again." Doesn't necessarily mean death, but I agree that that seems the easiest explanation. Question, though: how do you know that doesn't mean ARYA will be killed?
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Well - still enjoying myself - just wish I had more time to read/ :)
Dhomal
I'm glad! I hope you continue to do just that -- when you have time.
Cheers |
| Dhomal |
Posted - 28 Dec 2005 : 06:34:45
Hello-
Well - since Christmas has passed - things are slowing down a bit for me at work. I have now gotten through chaper 8. :)
I agree with previous comments - but one thing was not mentioned that I noticed - that I thought was quite glaring.
Arya basically stole that pendant from Greyt's desk. Seems Very out of character for her - or what I envision a knight doing. Certainly - there must be some plot reason for her to be in possession of it. Too bad it could not have gotten into her possession in a better way. LIke - given to her by Greyt's wife - who she meets briefly in his study.
Speaking of his wife - I find it interesting that from what I am getting out of the book - and the one statement - that she will be killed later in the book. Seems odd to mention that she will not talk to her again if she is not killed. But - seems to be the fates of all his previous wives....
Well - still enjoying myself - just wish I had more time to read/ :)
Dhomal |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 19 Dec 2005 : 18:16:40
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Originally posted by hammer of Moradin
You continue to impress, Erik. Walker is becoming more and more a catalyst for what is going on around him. His story is important, but it is just as important to those he comes in contact with. Great story of vengeance.
You said somewhere that you were concerned about adding too much action, what with the fight scenes, but I actually want more at this point.
Oh, you'll get it.
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As far as ability, I think Greyt is where he needs to be, but I also would have been much more interested in him if he had more political power.
Well, Greyt's complicated in terms of politics -- he's a dominant force, but mostly through his charisma and charm, not through being tightly connected to the people (who he despises, even as he needs their validation).
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The way you write his character, I can see why he does not, however it would have made for more cinematic fights if Walker fought with multiple opponents, as he does after killing Torlic. Using his powers to confuse and keep them guessing.
Oh, just wait. [ to those who know what I mean.]
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His mentor, Gylther'yel, is a hardcore nature druid/ghost. It shows that any viewpoint, even neutrality, can be extreme.
Indeed. For those gamers out there: what alignment is Gylther'yel? N? LN? NE?
Cheers |
| hammer of Moradin |
Posted - 19 Dec 2005 : 06:52:51
She is an interesting character. I read a spoiler about certain things she did, so her past with Walker is a bit clearer, which only goes to reinforce my thoughts on her. I will post more as more events happen with her involved. |
| Lord Rad |
Posted - 18 Dec 2005 : 13:21:26
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Originally posted by hammer of Moradin
His mentor, Gylther'yel, is a hardcore nature druid/ghost. It shows that any viewpoint, even neutrality, can be extreme.
I really took to Gylther'yel at first. Although she aint as black and white as she first seems, and with many fancinations - it can go to extremes, bordering on insanity!
She's quite a complex character. I'll be interested to hear more of what you think of her as the book goes on, Hammer. |
| hammer of Moradin |
Posted - 16 Dec 2005 : 19:26:24
You continue to impress, Erik. Walker is becoming more and more a catalyst for what is going on around him. His story is important, but it is just as important to those he comes in contact with. Great story of vengeance.
You said somewhere that you were concerned about adding too much action, what with the fight scenes, but I actually want more at this point. As far as ability, I think Greyt is where he needs to be, but I also would have been much more interested in him if he had more political power. The way you write his character, I can see why he does not, however it would have made for more cinematic fights if Walker fought with multiple opponents, as he does after killing Torlic. Using his powers to confuse and keep them guessing.
His mentor, Gylther'yel, is a hardcore nature druid/ghost. It shows that any viewpoint, even neutrality, can be extreme. |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 12 Dec 2005 : 17:06:46
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Originally posted by Malarick
One question though - how does the sword travel into the Ethereal, so that Walker can pass through solid objects such as doors and walls?
Basically, your gear and equipment becomes ethereal or incorporeal when you do.
In strict game terms, though, when he's still visible to non-ethereal creatures but insubstantial, he's incorporeal, not ethereal. ;)
Cheers |
| Malarick |
Posted - 12 Dec 2005 : 16:41:13
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Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie
In gamerese, the weapon is a +1 ghost touch mithral shatterspike longsword.
I loved the fact that it can be both deadly in the Ethereal as well as the material plane.
One question though - how does the sword travel into the Ethereal, so that Walker can pass through solid objects such as doors and walls? |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 12 Dec 2005 : 16:29:16
Here's something reposted from my sage scroll:
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Originally posted by warlockco
Eric,
I have a question about Ghostwalker.
Just picked up and just reached chapter 7, liking it alot so far.
Why a mithral blade? Just curious, since it is a somewhat odd choice.
Thanks
Edit: Just finished Ghostwalker, a most excellent novel. Can't wait to read more by you.
Warlock
I'm glad you enjoyed! Check out my "Wayfarer" short story, if you like!
As for your question: Well, it's an elven weapon -- it seemed appropriate.
In gamerese, the weapon is a +1 ghost touch mithral shatterspike longsword.
Cheers |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 09 Dec 2005 : 19:35:18
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Originally posted by Malarick
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Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie
Oh yes -- Harkon Lukas, I believe, is the first "evil bard" I'd ever heard of, and I liked the concept so much that I just HAD to do it. ;)
And if you like Greyts character then you would do well to pick up Death of a Darklord when it is re-released in 2006.
Re-released? What is this?
That and Heart of Midnight, which is even more apropos.
Cheers |
| Malarick |
Posted - 09 Dec 2005 : 18:28:12
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Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie
Oh yes -- Harkon Lukas, I believe, is the first "evil bard" I'd ever heard of, and I liked the concept so much that I just HAD to do it. ;)
And if you like Greyts character then you would do well to pick up Death of a Darklord when it is re-released in 2006. |
| Erik Scott de Bie |
Posted - 09 Dec 2005 : 16:32:04
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Originally posted by Lord Rad
I love this kind of scene, where Greyt starts to try and explain situations and try and play down the recent events which befell Arya to her. Only to slip up on two occassions and Arya states "I never mentioned that" or "I didn't tell that part to anyway"
You can imagine the flushed feeling he must have felt when he realised he'd been sussed, even though Arya didn't really press the matter.
Well, that's one of those tense scenes in the book where Arya realizes that Greyt's in on it but tries her best to ensure that Greyt doesn't realize she knows. Then there's this little awkward silence where Greyt really becomes threatening -- Arya's in a very bad spot. It's a cinematic thing. ;)
KnightErrantJR -- I'm glad you like Arya! I was a little worried about her character for just the reasons you point out, but I think I did a fairly good job keeping her realistic. She's certainly not the finest fighter in the book, and she's not overly powerful.
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Then again, you upholding a tradition of engaging swordswomen in the Realms, what with Arilyn and Alias (two of my other favorite Realms female warrior leads). Wait . . . I just noticed all of those begin with "A." Hm .
I just realized that. Heh. Total coincidence, that "A" thing. Unless it's some sort of "Alpha-woman" thing. :)
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I like the idea of an evil bard. Bards usually come across as either goodly fonts of knowlage or light hearded unconcerned types just trying to entertain or pick up knowlage here or there, so its a nice change to see one that is using his powers of persuasion in a manner that in nefarious.
Oh yes -- Harkon Lukas, I believe, is the first "evil bard" I'd ever heard of, and I liked the concept so much that I just HAD to do it. ;)
You know what I'm finding? Oddly, in almost every piece of my writing, there's a bard (or two). Weird.
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I like how Bars is a paladin that isn't trying to take over the leadership role. Its an interesting twist on a paladin as well. While its obvious that he doesn't like "sneaky" plans or proceedures, its also obvious that he knows the various roles that the different knights play in the group. He also seems pretty comfortable being the muscle, not the brains. Plus, for some reason I like the idea of an overweight paladin. Perhaps it showing that he can live up to his code and still have some human failings.
I enjoy paladins, particularly complex paladins. I play one in my local Realms game -- a rogue / paladin (inquisitor) -- who's just awesome.
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I keep wondering if he will ever hear his father speak though . . .
Oh yes (nods to Malarick) -- you will.
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