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Irennan
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Posted - 19 Aug 2021 :  20:44:57  Show Profile Send Irennan a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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@Wooly
Yep, since human brains are associative, memories of traumas are one of the biggest factors in shaping a brain's "control theory" (a model it creates about how to control your environment, which is a huge part of people's identity).
Even though the example that you made is an interesting situation, and we see a removal of memories leading to a more assertive person, the original identity effectively disappeared. In this case the result was a "more efficient" person, but she could have become that even without giving up her memories. Basically, the erasure of memories made her skip the act of processing the trauma. I'm not saying that this would be a bad thing or a good thing in reality, btw. If that was actually possible for us, it should obviously remain a choice/option for people who suffer from trauma: for some people it could be a good thing, for some other a bad thing, but what's lost in this process should always be made clear to the person (also because this has practical downsides along with the upsides, especially in traumas due to abuse).

For example, in the case of this story, maybe the protagonist would have still become as a more assertive person if her memories had remained and she had processed her trauma, but her experiences could have reinforced her compassion and empathy towards others, and given her a different perspective on her power (using it only for dire needs, for example, because possessing people is a violence. Also, imposing herself limits on what to influence of aperson's life, etc...). Heightened compassion and empathy would have been the result of the part of her identity that the memory erasure sacrificed. Just making assumptions here, to explain what I mean.

About the story itself, IMO, it would have been more interesting if she had chosen to lose her memories, and we were shown the consequences of that choice--both positive and eventually negative--and she had to deal with all that. The choice should have been tied to the fatal flaw of the protagonist, which would have made all the consequences meaningful, rather than having the memory loss happen to her (which is my impression of what happened, from your description). But perhaps the focus of the story wasn't the loss of memory, and that was just a device to get the protag going for the 'real' plot (though in that case I'm left wondering why the author chose to even include the loss of memory and the processing of trauma if they weren't relevant to the core of the story--it would have been better to just start with an assertive character who possessed that power, give her a fatal flaw, and focus on the point of the story).

Basically, from a narrative perspective, if something like memory loss to overcome trauma is included, it's important to the story, so it shouldn't just "happen to" the protagonist. It should be a choice (or at least the reuslt of previous choices), and the character should face all the consequences (if she chooses to lose memory and all goes well, then that's not much of a story). The processing of a trauma also shouldn't stop being relevant all of sudden, including stuff like that in your story means that it's related to the central theme of the story (or that it actually is the central theme itself). Then again, maybe the story actually kept exploring the topic and did things right, after all the only part that I know is the one related to the memory loss itself.




The basic point of the story was that the woman in question was investigating traitors in the ranks of the organization she worked for, and they found out and had her memory wiped. They intended to wipe her whole personality and replace it with something they could use, but she escaped. The story starts after all of this has happened -- so she's got to plug back into her own life, and still figure out who the bad guys were and deal with that.

Luckily, she'd been warned that she was going to lose her memory, so she had prepped by writing letters to herself, giving enough info that the wiped personality could fake it.

The story is kind of an X-Men/X-Files mashup, with the main character being one of the ranking members of an organization filled with supernatural types and working to keep the supernatural out of the public eye.



Sounds quite cool, is the processing of her trauma handled in any way the story?

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Irennan
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On the blood in the wine thing... it CAN depend on the representation. But for them to specifically call this out in the novels makes me think that the point was to "point out something". Drinking blood is something that has long been thought of as evil (i.e. vampires).... and now my mind as a result of typing this just went somewhere I didn't expect.... or at least somewhat barbaric. What would be interesting to note would be "whose blood"... is it the blood of animals who have been slaughtered for food (wait, they make their food with magic, no)? Is it the blood of their own people or their enemies? Is there secretly a group of vampires living amongst them that like living in the far frozen north because its dark for long periods?




From my understanding of sno4wy's explanation, they have gladiatorial fights in vats filled with grapes, so that the juice is squeezed out (a bit like in the past farmers would "dance" on the grapes to squeeze out the juice--rather 'eww' if you ask me, but yeah....), and at the same time some blood (from the cuts) goes into the juice. However, the fighters don't die, and the wounds are probably healed up like they're nothing afterwards, so there's no harm in this. Slaughtering animals, for example, would have indeed been interesting, and it would have pointed at something given that they can just conjure food, but this is actually harmless.

Idk, it just sounds like some edgy addition to me, given the context. Something like "they're so good and kind, but they still have this 'feral' instinct that they satisfy with harmless gladiatorial combats and blood-flavored wine", a bit like Drizzt and his hunter thingy. Don't get me wrong, channeling dark sides of your personality into constructive or harmless things is actually a worthy topic to explore, but unless it's actually explored throghout the whole story, it's just tacked on for the edge/shock factor ("omg, they drink blood??!1?? So edgy, and dark, and dangerous, and cool, and...")

As for the memory erasure, I pointed it out because if the story had actually tried to tell us something, that would have been golden material to do so. Instead, we see it condoned, which is very telling of what the author was trying to do.



Interestingly enough, I find it more abhorrent that they're effectively drinking the blood of sentients (its akin in some ways to cannibalism), though like you say... unless there's something else, it was probably added for shock value (and rereading, he says wrestling, not like swordfighting, so imagining the chances of death are generally small, and the amount of blood released is probably small). In my mind though this does break the original presentation that this culture is being presented as superior... they have blood sports... they drink blood from sentients in their drinks... so, as I see it, the drow of say Rhymanthiin might be more civilized than these dark elves, and maybe these guys are essentially bored elitists with a penchant for isolationism.



Maybe, that's one of the things that I was trying to say. RAS tried hard to make them look so civilized and awesome: he invaded the thoughts of his characters and even the scenes themselves with his author megaphone, screaming the stuff that he wants the readers to perceive and romanticizing/rationalizing the problematic aspects, but the actual content fails to deliver that impression.

If a Mary Sue is a character that gets praised in ways they don't deserve (just 'cuz they're so kewl, not because they deceive other characters/put on facades, that's fair game), and "wins" when they don't deserve to "win" (the story hands stuff to them, basically), then this society is a Mary Sue society.

Mathematics is the art of giving the same name to different things.

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jordanz
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Posted - 20 Aug 2021 :  07:29:41  Show Profile  Visit jordanz's Homepage Send jordanz a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Originally posted by Cards77

Two things:

1) RA Salvatore writing about dark elves is beating a dead horse that's been dead for 20 years......of course it's boring. He's been doing the same trick for 20 years.

2) His highly touted "fight scenes" are just a bunch of word salad. I never did get it.

There are so SO many great authors out there who don't get nearly the credit they deserve for their characters and story development.

I'm looking squarely at Richard Baker.

Compare and contrast The Last Mythal trilogy vs....well anything else.




The Last Mythal trilogy was amazing. I also think Richard Lee Byers deserves an honorable mention for the "Unholy" trilogy...
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@sno4wy

Why don't they just store cures and food beforehand (with their unlimited creation magic and with super easy access to ice), so in the days when magic goes away they still have all they need without any effort? Why would they need or want to "work hard", rather than spending time into mastering skills, improving themselves, and so on? Why can't they keep in shape just by doing fitness, training, learning to fight and stuff?

Idk, it feels so pointless to introduce this sport (that apparently everyone enjoys practicing, which is weird) and the grapes thingy as a justification for good physical shape, "just like Menzo". Also because that sport certainly won't give the same result as constnatly being a step from being killed.



Stored magic doesn't work during their magic-dead time. During that time, they're basically in an anti-magic zone. Jarlaxle tried to reach into one of his bags of holding and found that he couldn't access any of the items stored, it was just a mundane and empty bag.

Of course, once the magic-dead time passes, everything goes back to normal, like a light switch. I'm not familiar with all the iterations of what happens to magic items that go in and out of anti-magic zones throughout the editions, is there ever a time when doing such a thing permanently messes up the magical item? For instance, a bag of holding stores items in an extradimensional pocket, but being exposed to a magic-canceling effect could get rid of that magical pocket, right? Or otherwise sever the association?

The sport thing is indeed really silly. Aspiring athletes train all year for it. I'd also be willing to bet that if anyone pointed out to Bob that the citizens of Callidae hardly experience the same kinds of danger that the citizens of Menzo do, he'd argue that oh, but they live in the brutal north where the very weather is their enemy and oh not here are giants, polar worms, and now slaadi who are constantly trying to invade them, all the while conveniently ignoring the fact that WITHIN Callidae it's a veritable paradise.
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Eldacar
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I'm not familiar with all the iterations of what happens to magic items that go in and out of anti-magic zones throughout the editions, is there ever a time when doing such a thing permanently messes up the magical item? For instance, a bag of holding stores items in an extradimensional pocket, but being exposed to a magic-canceling effect could get rid of that magical pocket, right? Or otherwise sever the association?


Not particularly - while there are some occasional (and rare) edge cases, generally when a bag of holding or portable hole is in an antimagic field, it simply doesn’t work until removed from the field. The field suppresses magic, it doesn’t actually disjoin the item. However, effects created by a deity, or artifact-level magic, is unaffected, being “too strong” for the field to suppress.

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Lamora
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@Wooly Rupert: Any chance you can tell me what book you are talking about? It sounds interesting, and I would like to check it out.

Its a sad day for me. The local library has this book for free, and I just don't have any interest in getting it. I have kept up with Drizzt for a while. I missed the last trilogy, but I have read almost all other FR books by Salvatore. I am just tired of Drizzt (though I have seen that he is barely in this book anyway). Bob needs a brand new character to write about. Which he won't ever get to do because no more novel lines. Its just a warrior character can only be taken so far. 30 plus years of Drizzt being one of the best warriors in the Realms is enough for me. Maybe if Drizzt had been a Wizard... I am curious if the character would have taken off just as much if Bob had decided on a wizard instead of a ranger.
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Irennan
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Posted - 23 Aug 2021 :  21:40:32  Show Profile Send Irennan a Private Message  Reply with Quote
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Stored magic doesn't work during their magic-dead time. During that time, they're basically in an anti-magic zone.



That was just an example, there are many other workarounds. Communities tend to develop methods to face lean times and scarcity of resources, they aren't like "oh well, when those times come, we'll just work hard!".

In fact, with the kind of magic the aevendrow have, they could easily streamline it into "tech". They could develop magically empowered greenhouses to farm food, then store cereals and other easily conserved food for future use (such as when the antimagic field activates). The magic greenhouses would likely require little to no maintenance, considering the kind of setting RAS "built", and the people would still be free to focus on whatever the hell they want without a worry in the world.

I mean, at least this would show some basic (well, extremely basic, given that their magic is silly) capacity for innovation and progress, rather than relying on "I snap my fingers and the world does what I want" for everything.

Mathematics is the art of giving the same name to different things.

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Irennan
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Its just a warrior character can only be taken so far. 30 plus years of Drizzt being one of the best warriors in the Realms is enough for me. Maybe if Drizzt had been a Wizard... I am curious if the character would have taken off just as much if Bob had decided on a wizard instead of a ranger.



Wizard characters can also only be taken so far. Any character can only be taken so far, because their conflict as a "human" is what matters, not their power (even if they're non-human, they're still actually human, because the human lenses are all tat you have to write a story). So yeah, Drizzt as a wizard would have had a very simlar reception, and would suffer from the same exact problems now.

If quality is your goal, a story has to begin as late as possible (when the character's "survival system" shows symptoms of no longer working in their everyday life) and end as early as possible (if the transformation arc is doneand the consequences have been shown, then the story is done). Drizzt stopped being a character not because he's a warrior, but because he's become a bunch of stuff that RAS considers moral virtues on a stick. He's been watered down for so long that homeopathic remedies pale in comparison.

Of course, RAS' goal isn't quality, but just milking the cash cow, so all of that is irrelevant.

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sno4wy
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That was just an example, there are many other workarounds. Communities tend to develop methods to face lean times and scarcity of resources, they aren't like "oh well, when those times come, we'll just work hard!".

In fact, with the kind of magic the aevendrow have, they could easily streamline it into "tech". They could develop magically empowered greenhouses to farm food, then store cereals and other easily conserved food for future use (such as when the antimagic field activates). The magic greenhouses would likely require little to no maintenance, considering the kind of setting RAS "built", and the people would still be free to focus on whatever the hell they want without a worry in the world.

I mean, at least this would show some basic (well, extremely basic, given that their magic is silly) capacity for innovation and progress, rather than relying on "I snap my fingers and the world does what I want" for everything.



Yeah, no, they don't do that. For literally millennia they just work harder during the magic dead time.
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Wooly Rupert
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@Wooly Rupert: Any chance you can tell me what book you are talking about? It sounds interesting, and I would like to check it out.



The Rook. It's one of the very small number of books I've wanted to re-read as soon as I was done reading it.

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Its a sa day for me. The local library has this book for free, and I just don't have any interest in getting it. I have kept up with Drizzt for a while. I missed the last trilogy, but I have read almost all other FR books by Salvatore. I am just tired of Drizzt (though I have seen that he is barely in this book anyway). Bob needs a brand new character to write about. Which he won't ever get to do because no more novel lines. Its just a warrior character can only be taken so far. 30 plus years of Drizzt being one of the best warriors in the Realms is enough for me. Maybe if Drizzt had been a Wizard... I am curious if the character would have taken off just as much if Bob had decided on a wizard instead of a ranger.



It's the sheer number of books, there. I was already getting bored with Lord Ginsu by the time The Thousand Orcs books ruined the character for me.

Even if it's one of my favorite authors and they change the characters up, I simply can't read that much from one person in one go. I've got to mix it up, some.

Raymond E Feist is one of my favorite authors. His Riftwar books span something like 2 or 3 centuries. Some characters last the entire series, but mostly, each group of books intros new characters (though often related to prior ones). And still, I can't read all of it in one go. I have to read a few, read something else, and then come back to it and repeat.

I had the same issue the last time I tried to read all of Weis & Hickman's Dragonlance stuff: by the time I got to the last trilogy, all I could think about was reading something else. Weis & Hickman, like Feist, are among the few authors that can sell me something just by slapping their name on it -- but more than like 6 or 7 books, and I need something else. A palate cleanser, if you will.

This, I think, is part of the issue with the RAS stuff: a lot of books, but not enough new characters, not enough different directions being explored. I get that he's branched out some, away from the Companions, but it's still with long-established characters, and it takes like 20 books to get to that point.

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@Wooly Rupert: Any chance you can tell me what book you are talking about? It sounds interesting, and I would like to check it out.

Its a sad day for me. The local library has this book for free, and I just don't have any interest in getting it. I have kept up with Drizzt for a while. I missed the last trilogy, but I have read almost all other FR books by Salvatore. I am just tired of Drizzt (though I have seen that he is barely in this book anyway). Bob needs a brand new character to write about. Which he won't ever get to do because no more novel lines. Its just a warrior character can only be taken so far. 30 plus years of Drizzt being one of the best warriors in the Realms is enough for me. Maybe if Drizzt had been a Wizard... I am curious if the character would have taken off just as much if Bob had decided on a wizard instead of a ranger.



How about a warrior with grandmaster Monk abilities....?

But I get what you're saying...it appears that RA has put Wulfgar on the shelf for the foreseeable future...

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sleyvas
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Originally posted by Lamora

@Wooly Rupert: Any chance you can tell me what book you are talking about? It sounds interesting, and I would like to check it out.



The Rook. It's one of the very small number of books I've wanted to re-read as soon as I was done reading it.

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Originally posted by Lamora


Its a sa day for me. The local library has this book for free, and I just don't have any interest in getting it. I have kept up with Drizzt for a while. I missed the last trilogy, but I have read almost all other FR books by Salvatore. I am just tired of Drizzt (though I have seen that he is barely in this book anyway). Bob needs a brand new character to write about. Which he won't ever get to do because no more novel lines. Its just a warrior character can only be taken so far. 30 plus years of Drizzt being one of the best warriors in the Realms is enough for me. Maybe if Drizzt had been a Wizard... I am curious if the character would have taken off just as much if Bob had decided on a wizard instead of a ranger.



It's the sheer number of books, there. I was already getting bored with Lord Ginsu by the time The Thousand Orcs books ruined the character for me.

Even if it's one of my favorite authors and they change the characters up, I simply can't read that much from one person in one go. I've got to mix it up, some.

Raymond E Feist is one of my favorite authors. His Riftwar books span something like 2 or 3 centuries. Some characters last the entire series, but mostly, each group of books intros new characters (though often related to prior ones). And still, I can't read all of it in one go. I have to read a few, read something else, and then come back to it and repeat.

I had the same issue the last time I tried to read all of Weis & Hickman's Dragonlance stuff: by the time I got to the last trilogy, all I could think about was reading something else. Weis & Hickman, like Feist, are among the few authors that can sell me something just by slapping their name on it -- but more than like 6 or 7 books, and I need something else. A palate cleanser, if you will.

This, I think, is part of the issue with the RAS stuff: a lot of books, but not enough new characters, not enough different directions being explored. I get that he's branched out some, away from the Companions, but it's still with long-established characters, and it takes like 20 books to get to that point.



I hear you on that. I'm enjoying the witcher series (just started the last one today), but after this book, even IF the author has something else, I need to go on to another author. I will probably actually pick up some of the latest 5e stuff that I bought and "meant to read" before getting sidetracked, but then I can only read so much game material before I need a novel again.

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I hear you on that. I'm enjoying the witcher series (just started the last one today), but after this book, even IF the author has something else, I need to go on to another author. I will probably actually pick up some of the latest 5e stuff that I bought and "meant to read" before getting sidetracked, but then I can only read so much game material before I need a novel again.



I've been actively varying my reading more, of late. For casual reading, I usually grab a novel -- though sometimes I'll grab manga or a gaming book, if I'm not eating whilst I read. I'm also reading two gaming books right now (The Mwangi Expanse for Pathfinder 2E and Dragons of the Sixth World, an older Shadowrun source). I keep one of those near but not in each "reading room" so I can grab one whilst stepping in there. And there's usually a gaming pdf open on my computer at work, though some days I barely have time to bring up the file.

Still, though, even with all that, I still try to refrain from reading too much from one author at one time.

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By the way, so far, what I've heard described of these drow in this story, despite it being so "wrong".... I find it great. See I look at it as these are drow that think they're better than everyone else, and unlike those "other horrible drow", they say the "proper" things that are supposed to be said. In other words, they're hypocrites, and they're using the fact that they have better "tech" to validate their horrible behavior. They probably take every chance they can to tell all those "uninformed" people just how "uninformed" and "clueless" they are and preach on how their society is so much better as a result. Of course, their society being so much better, its okay then if they perform some overtly horrible act in order to keep their society functioning. I mean, its all for "the greater good" in the end. If it weren't for all those "horrible other unlearned people" then things would be okay....

sound familiar?


Sleyvas, this sounds like something a gold elf noble would say. Oops, should I address a gold elf as Ar'Tel-Quessir?
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