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Alaundo
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Rinonalyrna Fathomlin
Great Reader
USA
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 Posted - 09 Nov 2007 : 23:30:36
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As I said before, I really am getting into this novel. The characters are great, and overall Mr. Cordell is a fine writer. I kind of know where the intrigue involving Telarian is going, but I'm enjoying that plot nonetheless. |
"Instead of asking why we sleep, it might make sense to ask why we wake. Perchance we live to dream. From that perspective, the sea of troubles we navigate in the workaday world might be the price we pay for admission to another night in the world of dreams."
--Richard Greene (letter to Time) |
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Kyrene
Senior Scribe
South Africa
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Posted - 02 Jun 2008 : 14:12:02
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| The writing is still technically good, even though I am only really reading for the parts concerning Raidon, Kiril and Gage. I liked the little flashbacks to Darkvision, but felt the sudden (second) attack/battle between the Knights and the wood elves was a little disjointed in Chapter 12, even if it was foreshadowed in the previous chapter. |
And once again, Probability proves itself willing to sneak into a back alley and service Drama as would a copper-piece harlot.
I am a sexy, shoeless god of war!
The Sellplague began, for all intents and purposes, in the dominions of the Corporation. Greed murdered Good Design, unraveling common sense in the cosmos and destroying her dominion. At the same time, Sales Fears and Warcraft Envy happened into alignment. This cataclysmic coincidence led to upheaval, shaking apart the primeval order, opening up holes in wallets, and reshaping everything... |
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